Evaluation for Sound Clip

We created a sound clip using Foley sounds.
We used images to help stimulate and focus the audience attention to the sound,
I feel like it made the experience more dramatic and used the other senses to
understand the story behind the clip.
We used different effects such as panning the sound from the back to the front
to make it sound like the voice is getting closer. We used fades in and out to make the
sound more sharp because we wanted to scary the audience.
We used other sound effects such as thunder/rain to show more atmosphere and
for the audience to know where we are that there's been a change in location. we used a moaning sound from a intro of a song which makes the sound clip feel more scary but also makes you
feel uncomfortable.
We used a M&M to make the sound of the biting into flesh because it is a crisp sound
and its very quick. we used the sound of pineapple being chewed to show sucking of blood.
I would improve this sound clip by making the chewing part longer as it doesn't have much
of an impact when it is short.